chapter three – the gift

Once upon a time, amidst the bustling city of New York, there lived a young medical student by the name of Ella. Not only was she a talented medical student, but she was also gifted in the ways of magic. She was a curious blend of knowledge and mystique. Her dark brown hair and hazel eyes held a sparkle of realms yet unexplored. 

She often found herself drawn to the enchanting realm of the city’s trains. There, ordinary moments could unfold into the most extraordinary medical adventures, she thought. 

Ella possessed a rare gift, akin to the power of a wizard’s potions and a witch’s charms, a magic that held the essence of healing. This ability had been lost to even the most powerful of casters. In a world where the intricacies of medicine were as vital as the most potent spells, Ella possessed this unique talent and wanted to make the most of it.

Yet, also in this very same world, power and corruption went hand in hand. Revealing such a rare and potent talent could attract attention from those who sought to exploit it. She had to keep her abilities a guarded secret to protect both herself and others.

She understood that keeping her gift hidden allowed her to best help the sick people of New York without drawing unnecessary attention. Hence, her love of its trains. With their transient passengers and fleeting encounters, they offered a sanctuary for her to quietly practice her art. She found solace in the clatter of wheels upon tracks, where the motion mirrored the passengers’ pulses. Her desire to bring comfort to others drove her. Every journey became a chance to mend broken bones or lift sore spirits.

Ella’s journey aboard the train this misty morning was as much a quest for knowledge as it was an adventure into the magical unknown. As the train rattled along its tracks, the promise of new discoveries filled her with excitement. She felt the familiar tingling in her fingertips once again and knew that it was time. 

Among the passengers, she spotted a young boy clutching his arm in pain.

“Are you alright?” Ella approached him with a gentle smile.

The boy looked up, tears glistening in his eyes. “It hurts,” he whimpered.

“Let me help,” Ella whispered, placing her hands on his injured arm. She cast the healing spell, hiding the soft glow enveloping her fingers beneath the white gloves she wore. 

The boy’s pain melted away, replaced by relief and astonishment. “Thank you, ma’am,” he said, blinking in wonder.

Ella smiled, “You’re welcome. Take care now.”

In the back of the carriage, Ella noticed an elderly man sitting alone, his frail form hunched over. The lines on his face told a story of wisdom, but his eyes held a glimmer of weariness. She felt an inexplicable urge to approach him, her heart tugging with a mix of compassion and trepidation.

Gathering her courage, Ella made her way to his side. “Excuse me, sir,” she said softly and warmly. “I couldn’t help but notice that you seem unwell. Is there anything I can do to help?”

The elderly man looked up, his eyes clouded with pain. “I’m afraid it’s cancer, young lady,” he replied. ”There’s nothing that can be done.”

“Perhaps, there is something I can do,” she said, her voice determined yet gentle.

Ella removed her white gloves. As she placed her palms on the elderly man’s frail frame, her magic surged forth, its true brilliance in full power, concealed away from the curious eyes of other passengers.

Slowly, the pain in the man’s body eased, replaced by a look of gratitude in his eyes. 

“I don’t feel the pain anymore,” he whispered, with disbelief and joy mingling in his voice. “The cancer…it feels like its gone. But how?”

Ella’s smile held both weariness and triumph. “Just rest now,” she replied.

As she moved through back through the carriage, healing one passenger after another, she couldn’t help but notice a subtle ache in her chest. The soft glow of her magic wavered momentarily. She pressed a hand to her heart, trying to steady her breath, determined to carry on.

But Ella’s chest pain did not subside. She tried to conceal her discomfort. Yet, as the train journeyed on, the strain became more pronounced. Ella’s steps faltered, and beads of perspiration formed on her forehead. The passengers noticed her distress and offered their concern.

“Are you alright, miss?” a kind old woman inquired, her eyes full of worry.

Ella managed a faint smile, though it was tinged with fatigue. “I’ll be fine. Just need to rest a bit.”

As the train reached its destination, Ella stepped onto the platform, feeling both fulfilled and drained. The image of the old man swirled in her head. Her legs trembled beneath her. But her heart remained steadfast. 

In the years to come, there were many tales of a mysterious healer on the trains of New York City, but never more than at the level of a whisper.


3 responses to “chapter three – the gift”

  1. Many stories are built on the strength of their endings. I did not see the dismal ending coming. I got suckered in by the optimism of it all. You had some beautiful prose in there but just watch out for repeated word choice. I do it too because there may be space between writing sessions and I forget what I’ve already said. But yeah I liked the ending a lot. I almost imagined she was taking on their illnesses like a reverse Dorian Grey. I also could see this being stretched into a longer story.

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    • Thank you for the praise and constructive feedback. The notion of a reverse Dorian Gray twist is fascinating. Chapter four is meant to build on this world and all of these characters may find their way into future stories.

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  2. I read chapter three and four together and love the dichotomy between the two tones. In this story it’s as if the words bounce along happily as you read them. A lighter tone that seems to be one with the young pure hearted protagonist. The story shows the lighter “good” intentions and gives you a warm feeling throughout even if the ending hints at a sad fate for our heroine.

    The last line was perfect. A subtle end hinting at just how truly pure Ella is, potentially sacrificing her life to cure cancer. And even though it’s sad, that line lulls you into the end gently and kindly, with just a whisper.

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