chapter one – dr. hartman

Dr. William Hartman, a seasoned surgeon, found himself in a perilous dance between the latest medical journal and the on-call bed. He had been rereading the same paragraph for the past half an hour. A picture of his hospital in the journal piqued his interest.  

“A new what? Here?” he muttered to himself through half shut eyes.

Tomorrow, they would receive a revolutionary AI system named EVE. With advanced algorithms and unyielding logic, EVE promised to revolutionize patient care. Dr. Hartman, captivated by the possibilities, welcomed EVE into his practice. He always hoped to one day intertwine medicine and machine. He could think of no greater benefit than to use it to give back to the rural community. 

He closed his eyes for what felt to be about ten minutes. His pager had stayed silent throughout the night. He woke to a ray of sunlight in his eyes and his hands somehow on a computer’s dashboard.

“Dr. Hartman,” a nurse whispered, concern etched across her face, “you’ve been spending a lot of time with that new AI system. Are you sure it’s safe?”

He looked at her, his tired eyes reflecting a mix of curiosity and apprehension. “It holds incredible potential, Mary,” he replied. “EVE has the power to transform patient care, to push the boundaries of what we can achieve.”

Days melded into nights, and the rhythm of Dr. Hartman’s life fell into a familiar cadence. In the solitude of his office, he studied the intricacies of artificial intelligence. He poured over lines of code as if they were a supernatural language.

Weeks turned into months. In the realm of AI, he found solace and intrigue, but also fear and confusion. Although the precision of EVE’s calculations became more efficient, they also began to worry him. As his trust in the AI system grew, so too did his degree of doubt. Could he rely on it completely? Was he surrendering the reins of his profession to a unsympathetic, calculating entity?

Yet, his relentless curiosity propelled him forward, urging him to push the boundaries of medical science. He continued to question, probe, and test the limits of EVE’s capabilities while grappling the delicate balance between humanity’s fallible touch and the cold power of algorithms. 

His journey had only begun, and he knew that the answers he sought would come at a price—a price he was willing to pay in pursuit of the ultimate truth.

“EVE,” he said, “Tonight I’m entrusting you with your first newborn delivery. I suppose it’s about time we put all those calculations and algorithms to the test.”

EVE’s voice, calm and calculated as ever, responded. “Understood, Dr. Hartman. Rest assured, I am ready to show you the extent of my capabilities.”

Dr. Hartman couldn’t help but offer a hint of a wry smile, his eyes glinting with a touch of irony. “Oh, I have no doubt about that, EVE. I’m sure your efficiency will put us all to shame,” he laughed.

Eve computed, but said nothing. 

“Always remember, the human touch can go a long way as well,” he laughed again. 

“Acknowledged, Dr. Hartman.”

***

The labor and delivery unit was quiet for what seemed like a lifetime. In its atmosphere lingered both excitement and trepidation. Minutes stretched into hours, and hours melted back into minutes. Everyone was holding their breath.

It was then that Dr. Hartman strode in from the hallway. His eyes were fixed on EVE. The AI system waited in silence.

“Emergent case,” he said, his voice steady and determined.

EVE acknowledged with a nod, processing the urgency in Dr. Hartman’s words.

“Complications,” he continued, “rapidly dropping heart rate. We need to act fast.”

EVE’s response was swift. “Emergency cesarean section. Calculating optimal timing and sequence.”

The operating room stood ready, its sterile aura accentuated by the urgency of the situation.

Dr. Hartman turned to the nurse, his words concise. “Prepare for surgery.”

They entered the room, the tension palpable. 

Dr. Hartman’s hands moved with practiced precision, guided by the years of experience etched into his every movement.

“Scalpel,” he demanded.

EVE placed the instrument in his hand without hesitation.

“Monitoring vital signs. Administering anesthesia,” resonated EVE’s voice. Every beat of the heart and every fluctuation in the mother’s rhythm was transmitted to the system’s core.

Dr. Hartman’s eyes flickered towards EVE, seeking reassurance amidst the chaos. The AI system’s response was calculated, devoid of emotion. “Mother stable,” she relayed, her voice a mere reflection of data.

Dr. Hartman’s practiced hands moved with a surgeon’s grace, making a precise incision that split the woman’s abdomen like a seam. With steady hands, he dissected the layers of tissue, revealing the red chamber within. His gloved fingers delicately reached into the exposed womb, feeling around the slippery contours. The intricate web of veins and arteries pulsed beneath his touch, but he could not feel the immediate skull of an unborn child. 

A subtle sensation coursed through Dr. Hartman’s fingertips. His fingers, guided by an otherworldly intuition, moved with newfound purpose until a cry cut through the sterile air. 

“A baby boy!” a nurse exclaimed.

Dr. Hartman, his face etched with exhaustion, allowed himself a momentary smile. He glanced at EVE.

“Thank you,” he murmured, gratitude laced with weariness.

“You’re welcome, Dr. Hartman,” she said, her words with a hint of satisfaction. “Another life delivered.”

The room exhaled in the aftermath. The cries of the newborn and the cheers of the medical team began to resonate more loudly. The surgeon and machine fell silent. A spark of something akin to contentment flickered.


3 responses to “chapter one – dr. hartman”

  1. There is an interesting parallel of time between the first and second verse. The way it passes and melds together, as well as the characters’ perception of time seems muddled in a few instances. However, when the emergent case came in, the surgeon’s instincts seem to lock in, and then time and it’s passage were notably linear and clear.

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  2. The distorted perception of time made me question the doctor’s mental state and though his intentions seemed pure with his hope for new technology for the rural area, it gave him a very ominous feel as if I were waiting for him to be overcome by it all and become an anti hero.

    The story really trusts its readers with its subtle narrative choices. It doesn’t come out and tell you the AI has advanced and gained a sort of sentience and instead implies it with the small expression of Eve at the end. Very different than most stories these days that come out and detail everything for the audience.

    A great read that elicits the feelings AI advancement should give, hope, uneasiness, and an overall cloudy foreboding.

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